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the girl who isn't me

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She's the girl with the smile
that dries the saddest tears
She's the girl you've adored
through all these years

The girl with charisma
a perfect glow and style
The girl you'd do anything for
just so she'd turn and smile

The girl you'd climb mountains for
or sail the widest sea
The girl you'd buy the world for
The girl who isn't me

I waited all my life
just for you to find
The girl that really loves you
catches you from behind

A life without love
is no life at all
And now the day you notice me
is on the day I fall

I hope she  learns to love you
And is as true as can be
For you deserve the best

  Your sincerely,
       Me
also known as Suicide Note of a Lover
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Submitted: January 5

January 6
i know i said that this doesn't apply to me and that i didnt know where it came from... well that was all true until last night.
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shade's avatar
I think the rhythm in the last paragraph works well, in terms of the way it falls to the last line. The first rhyme "tears" and "fears" bothers me a bit though. Maybe its the connection to the 80's band of that rhyming name. I think I'll appoligise now for my rather narcissistic introductory message on My Space.